Notes from discussion with Chris pre Chile:
Notes on content of paper
Instrument description paper
Introduction: why are we doing this, what is dome seeing about, lightning review of dome seeing in the past (reference Stubbs paper and other paper Chris mentioned today)
Citations to AuxTel/Rubin design
Say we are making a prototype for the system that is to be installed in the main dome
Talk about the importance of short duration imaging capabilities, which allow us to freeze atmospheric effects
Compare to DIMMS - DIMMS do on the sky what MOSS does on the ground (or we are building the transmitter to which regular DIMMs are receivers)
Figure 1 - conceptual diagram; try to finish the CAD once design is truly finalized
Describe and rationalize design choices (out of all the ways to do this, why did we choose what we did)
Preliminary results, including measured differential motion data from Chile
I have started a brief outline of the paper, which is accessible here.